Daydream-Anatomy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[super cute kitty anime techno.]

Really nice

Amazing melodies, although a bit generic sounding/tone, the transitions were fun and extremely smooth. You gave him a very good starting point for a collab:3

-drunkkat

[Search In The Forest]

Not bad

I notice the lack of experience, I'm guessing you're fairly new to making music:]
What stood out the most is fl default stuff/styrus strings. It just has an unpolished feeling. While the compositions fine:3 it feels lacking.
Cleaned up, it'd probably remind me of snes zelda games when you're in the forest:]

Look up futura sample pack on youtube, it should take you to a vid with a descript that has a lot of goodies.

If you're not busy I could use a review on =chaoticinferno=, no obligation, but even if you could just pm me an opinon I'd be very grateful^^

-stratkat

[.Halloween.]

Reminds me of lemondemon

Nice lyrics and vocals, the kicks a little weak, maybe putting a more standard/club one behind the hardstyle (i think) kick when there's more going on, like during vox, more/stronger percussion might help the songs pace. But that's just what I'm thinking

It blends together well, so maybe what I said is moot.

If you have time it'd be awesome if you could review my song =chaoticinferno=
if not it's cool.
9/10 5/5

-stratkat

[Distance - Masterpeace]

It's pretty cool...

but the guitar tone really hurts it dude, you def need to mess with it more, or really I'd recommend not trying to use slayer or w/e you're using for distorted guitar, and just replace it with a synth.

I can hear the anime influence in it, not as an op or ed, but as maybe background music for a montage or a busy city scene.

Work on it and this could be great.
I didn't vote because a 3 would lower your score a lot atm since it's high.

If you have time it'd be awesome if you could review my song =chaoticinferno=
if not it's cool, but even if you don't want to pm-ing an opinion would be awesome.

[The Banshee (Preview)]

Another review

Love that fat synth in the intro:3
It really adds to the creepy halloween inspired (I'm assuming) riff.
The beats really funky too x]
I don't care much for the lead synths tone/sound though, what it's doing isn't bad, I just don't like the sound, but that's just my opinion. It's too...hallow? Idk, it feels like something was scooped out of it with eq, or something needs to be put in it with eq.

Towards the end I found the claps to be excessive, maybe try messing with the velocity to bring knock down a few and give it variety, or mix claps. Listening to them again they might be panned, if not that'd also be cool, each clap being on the other speaker, left, right, left, right, etc.

If you don't mind I'd really like a review on =ChaoticInferno=
Remind you this is the third review I've given you, the other two were more extensive.:3 Even pm-ing me an opinion would be cool. No obligation, I enjoy reviewing your stuff either way.

cheshyre responds:

Thanks! You left some good ideas in this comment!
I listened and reviewed your ChaoticInferno song too and I hope it was helpful. You've got some awesome talent!

[Eternal Love[Original Mix]

I'ma describe to you my thoughts on this.

(review's written stream of conscious while listening)
That intro melodies so sweet, great use of delay and reverb, and when the synth kicks in, that sudden low end makes the hair on the back of my neck stand up. Stirs up emotion, it's really good.

The transition's smooth (from intro to the dance-y part) and the kick seems perfect. The interlude felt like it came on to soon, but it's better then getting repetitive I suppose. Another smooth transition, and the change up surprised me going back into the danc-y stuff:] Ending lacked a climax though, it should've had a little extra something, an extention of the intro with new stuff, then faded out. Really that's just me though.

Hope you like my thoughts, and that they're coherent.
-strat

stephenstripling responds:

Great thoughts, thanks!

[Music Box (remix)]

Cool twist on trance

The drums in the intro make up a melody on their own, distorted, and somewhat danceable. Though the synth that comes in every idk, 5-8 seconds in the beginning, I don't like it's tone, I imagine something saw-ier, or more distorted, at least at the begining, then maybe growing cleaner as it progresses, that might even make the transition smoother at 1:36. But you made the song so you'd know best what works, it's just my opinion anyway.

The piano melodies were very pretty.

I found it very refreshing as a trance song, would be awesome to see people dance to it. With all the claps in the intro, maybe change the ones that sound panned to the right, or make them quieter, and more consistent, it'd probably make the intro sound more structured to people.

Anyway I got kinda picky and think most of what I said might not be coherent or I explained it wierd. It's just opinions/thoughts/ideas I had while listening.

-stratkat

cheshyre responds:

No no, your suggestions made perfect sense as I read them and are really good ideas! I'll keep them in mind for the next trance-ish song I try. Thanks for the 9 and for the great advice!! Hopefully I'll just get better and better...

[ambient chaos(wip)]

I like it a lot

All the ambient like sounds in the intro are awesome with the steady wobble and I love the transition about a minute in.

If I were you I'd so finish this for Madness day.

thanks again for the review.

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

sadly i just noticed this and its a few days after madness day haha XD maybe next year XD make sureto check my new stuff ;) if ya can check out evaluation its my lateist finished song ;)

[Fast Distance (WIP)]

^.,.,.^

I love the chord progression in the intro, and the piano tone.
The transition's pretty smooth, when the snare comes in. Main melody's really catchy at the end.
Should be amazing when it's finished:]

thanks for the review(s)

DJ-Qwamii responds:

Thanks mate. Glad you loved it. Yeah it's still a work in progress though, a demo. and sure, no problem. :)

[-YRX- Evil Clown DrumStep]

Really cool

This is a really good madness submission, it could easily be used by another flash artist for a madness day submission. The rubber duck sample is just awesomeXD I guess it's supposed to be a clown nose, but I thought rubber duck instantly.

Lots of tension in the track.

I don't have any real critique, it sounds good to me dude.:]

YouriX responds:

Hahaha! Thanks fo rthe review man ;)
Glad you really liked it! I spend days making this one track.